11/19/08

An attempt at poetry.

He starts upheavals for shame
His heart dispersed
A tale for his dame
Who weap for her cursed
A tale of unhinged beaus

An epic of romantic desires
To the one we call "love"
The pained, the liars
The ones we beloved
This is a memoir from long ago




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Feedback? I'm not into poetry so tell me if you think
my first attempt was bad/good/ etc.

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